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000! "Tele-pathetic!!"


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So today, as I'm feeling sorry for myself...my current plight.... and wringing my fists into the sky and screaming at the Gods who rule my Fate: "Why have thee foresaken me?!!" What happens?  But one of the viewers to this very site is an old love of mine...and like that....my plight hasn't changed, yet I realize it is up to me to change and fix it. At least...I feel better...So, below a poem I wrote her when we realized that the distance between us, made US...well...not to be....

it's one of my favorites & I hope you all like it!

SO to her....Adonna....love of mine forever....thank you for being you and contacting me just when only God could have sent you to me....

your old poem:

 

Addonna ; of the Ocean

I thought you were,

that little Girl,

playing with me in the sand;

It was your head I was out to save.

But,

Alas,

I'm just the Lone Sandcastle

and you...

the Oncoming Wave....

 

C Copyright 1971

Stuart Phillip Kaufman

CanUrel8 Press

Posted by Da Duck at 5:59 PM - 18 Comments   Add a Comment  
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that was beautiful  
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by ms. diamond (PM , CC ) on Monday April 24, 2006 @ 9:56 PM




this is very pretty. I am a fellow poet and also am caring about someone that can not possible care for me back.
Please keep up the poetry.
It will give you wings.


sincerely yours,
WhEnShInNiNgStArScRyOnMyHeArT
 
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by Italian~Beauty16 (PM , CC ) on Friday April 28, 2006 @ 12:38 PM




dumbass
poetry sucks
you are not a telapathic
dumbass
 
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by potleaf (PM , CC ) on Friday May 12, 2006 @ 10:45 AM




i would just like to say i am so amazed. i cant even believe your talent.my name is sami. will you please take the time to write me a simple loving poem that reminds me of happiness. i will appreciate it bunches. you would make my day. thanks for your time,
sami
 
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by sammy (PM , CC ) on Wednesday June 14, 2006 @ 8:17 PM




have she really thrown you far away from your security? i feel the heartbreak. is aw how my sister felt bad about her break-up with her boyfriend fron webdatedotcom. i saw how devastated she was and all the hassles she went through. like you, she was still friends with him even after the break-up. here comes the ex pretending like nothing bad happened and still wanting my sister to be close with him. that's a pain in the ass.  
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by averagedrinker (PM , CC ) on Wednesday June 21, 2006 @ 12:55 AM




WOW! I got a girl friend 2000 miles away. And like a wave she took me away. Now she writes me very little. Think i will send that poem to her.  
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by Fred funny (PM , CC ) on Sunday July 30, 2006 @ 9:55 AM




hey, i would just like to say that that poem is awesome. i have some1 that i love along way away too. and i am sure that he doesnt care about me that much. keep on workin ur magic.


saho
 
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by *Saho* (PM , CC ) on Monday August 7, 2006 @ 11:13 AM




nice.  
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by Stealtharachnid (PM , CC ) on Saturday August 26, 2006 @ 3:17 AM




The Poem is beautiful.

I think Love is grand, even when it doesn't turn out the way we want it too! God loves us so much, He is happy to see you have the courage to Love. That old saying it is better to have Loved and Live, then never to have loved at all, is still, true, my friend.

(((hug)))
Sherri, Happily Married
 
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by Sherri, Happily Married (PM , CC ) on Friday September 29, 2006 @ 2:38 PM




That was simple and beautiful all at once! Well done.  
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by GIrlpreacher (PM , CC ) on Thursday October 12, 2006 @ 1:29 PM




i do not respond to men as a rule... but you sound fun and do all the things i would love to do.. i went to learn fencing, but there were not enough clients to make the class up... but i have put it on my "before i die list".. ha ha ha.

Keep the humour..... it is a hidden Angel.
 
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by spookey (PM , CC ) on Thursday October 19, 2006 @ 5:48 AM




Very Nice. Aloha.  
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by Gecko (PM , CC ) on Monday October 23, 2006 @ 10:52 PM




Felt a "cosmic kick in the gut" with the last line. I can relate....Marin is amazing - used to live in San Rafael. Be well....lulu  
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by LuLu (PM , CC ) on Tuesday October 24, 2006 @ 8:18 PM




Thanks for the poems, I am new to the blog scene, navigating my way through this thing.  
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by ttucker (PM , CC ) on Thursday December 7, 2006 @ 11:11 AM




so feeling sorry for yourself today...you may unsuspectingly be in the majority and not the minority would that make you feel better?...The great u.s. hedgehog epidemic..ciao  
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by crying in the wilderness (PM , CC ) on Tuesday December 12, 2006 @ 10:53 AM




I am new to this . But also share your intrest. I loved reading your poems . As well as blogs regaurdless of there context. Thank you for sharing .  
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by ImperfectPerfection (PM , CC ) on Saturday December 16, 2006 @ 12:45 PM




Hi there man from england here new to blogging. I am currently 20thou words up on my novel and need some publishing ideas. has anybody tried publishing on the net in instalments a la neo Dickens? I have eight childrens musicals published and want to break into prose.  
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by Greegrops (PM , CC ) on Sunday December 24, 2006 @ 11:43 AM




as a new user, this hasbeenmy favorite blog!b ive looked at tons and im gonna keep watching this one!  
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by XslamX (PM , CC ) on Wednesday January 10, 2007 @ 1:51 AM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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